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Y’all know I love a challenge, so when S.M. Boyce tagged me in The Look Challenge last week, I was eager to participate. The way this works: I had to search my WIP manuscript for the work “look”, and post the scene that surrounds the first occurrence of “look”. I’ve opted to share a teaser scene from PRIESTESS OF MOAB, my second New Adult novel which will be published in 2013. But before you get to read the sample, I’ve tagged a few authors for the challenge:
Have fun, ladies! Can’t wait to sneak a first look! Now, on to the sample of PRIESTESS OF MOAB:
Silently, the grandmothers led me from the bathing pool back to the temple. They melted into the shadows around the entryway, and I stood, alone, looking into the temple, lingering on the threshold. Although I had run about this place with full freedom for years, the transition from child to woman was seen as the change from one self to another. Because of that, I had to wait to be invited in, as would any who came here for the first time. Strangers have always been welcomed by the Goddess, but the rules of hospitality must be obeyed.
While I stood poised on the threshold of my new life, I wondered what womanhood would have in store for me. I couldn’t conceive of a life outside of the temple, and although I watched and listened with an eager heart, I was not entirely sure what my role would be now that I was no longer a child. Swallowing down my fear, I closed my eyes and whispered a prayer to the Mother. I had no reason to doubt her: my fate was secure.
I waited for a heartbeat, and then another. I was just beginning to feel nervous when a clear, rich voice called out my name. Larina spoke the words of welcome, but the voice issuing from her mouth was not her own: it was a voice I had heard many times in my own thoughts and dreams, but never in the waking world.
The Goddess was speaking through Larina, and it was her voice that welcomed me to womanhood. Trembling in awe at hearing her voice aloud for the first time in my life, I entered the temple.
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Wow, thanks for the sneak peak and the tag. I think I’ve missed so much over the summer and this sounds intriguing to me. I love the story of Ruth and Naomi and can’t wait to see how you’ve woven that in with your own world.
Do you know yet when your release date is? If you do a blog tour make sure you email me and I’ll gladly help out.
Thanks, Charity!! Priestess will release on May 1, 2013. I’d love your help. Let me know if you’d be interested in Beta reading.
Sounds great Jen! Since there are things at stir, I don’t want to post a blurb on my blog, but I will here.
I look in the mirror and pull my hair tight into a low bun. It’s conscious, my decision to hide this bright flag. I worry it’s unfurling will ignite my parent’s grief all over again.
Their two red-headed daughters. Skipped a generation they say.
All I know is I’m ready for this hurt to end.
Jaye, that gave me shivers!!! Thanks for sharing it with us. 🙂 Can’t wait to see you next week.
Oh my gosh… I SO want to read this – even just from this snippet! Wow! Powerful stuff! Can’t wait!
Thank you! 🙂 I need to email you a rough copy: poke me in October if you’re still willing to read!!
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